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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based. |
▶ Topic : Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals. Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish. |
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| The definition of dream could be delivered in a wide range of ways. Somebody says dream means just illusion or something like unrealistic, but somebody says dream is ultimate goal of life. Nonetheless, to the most of people, dream seems quite likely to be an important factor of our lives. In my opinion, dream has to be considered seriously and it needs to be discerned carefully. | The reason why we must take time and have a discernment toward dream, the people's motives are not completely pure. Most of dreams people has are tainted with their greed and selfishness. These kind of dreams are constantly making troubles. The people who are following these dreams will eventually face the result which brings harms to others and even to them. There are so many cases about people who set their goal to "money" failed to keep themselves from illicit behaviors. | Therefore, when we deal with dreams, we have to consider deeply whether our dreams are influenced by negative aspects of ours. We must grow the ability to find and choose something that brings the fruitful results to our lives. It is also a good way to discuss about our dreams with other people who care us. When we set the goal that is worthy and appropriate, the life following that will deliver not only achievement but also benefits to others. |
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument. |
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▶ Topic : The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University: A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors. |
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| | The letter from the faculty committee of Seatown University has a serious lack of reasons. They requested free tuition for their children who attend college with the example of a study which showed faculty retention rate was higher when they awarded that free-tuition system. This argument needs more specific evidences to support its strength. | First of all, the study performed at nearby Oceania University has to evaluated by what was the top factor of faculty retention. There could be possible many reasons of retention like raising financial distribution to their research, individual achievements of their classes and students, and other kinds of welfare they were given. The faculty retention could be a coincidently happened at the similar time when a free-tuition policy appeared. The faculty of Seatown University has to collect the right standard evaluation index of the study, and make sure their argument is evitably acceptable. | Second, it is not proved enough the free-tuition policy will satisfy all faculty members of Seatown University. They have mistakes to ignore diversity of professors. It is possible to encourage them with that policy but that is limited to the professors who have college-aged children. Among the professors, there could be single persons, couples with no child, and with children but not enough aged to go college. There are different and various needs of professors and it is dangerous to make certain this policy will satisfy the whole faculty members and improve their morale. Committee must research with various ways like survey to examine the common needs of professors. |
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