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The reading
passage contends that the Etruscans were originated from Turkey, and it can be explained
by three theories. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points
that contradict this argument.
First of all,
the speaker argues that it is hard to believe the DNA evidence. This is because
the remains discovered in Etruscan grave sites appeared thousands years ago, so
that they may be damaged. Also, bones of these remains has been contaminated
for a long time. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s assertion that DNA
evidence verifies that the Etruscans came from Turkey.
Second,
according to the lecture, the similarity between Etruscan and Turkish language suggested in the reading passage is unreliable. This is supported by the fact that having different languages
with similar alphabets does not necessarily indicates strong linguistic connection.
We should think about the possibility that only a few tribes in the Etruscan
would survive. This counters the reading passage’s claim that Turkish and
Etruscan people have the same origin, which can be proved by their linguistic similarity.
The final point
made by the lecture is that there is no reason that Turkish and Etruscan people
had the same funerary customs. The reason is that cremation was already gone very
long time ago in northern Italy. This implies that such culture of funeral
continued to exist in some local regions only. This refutes the reading passage’s argument
that the Etruscans shared funerary practices with Turks.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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GOOD
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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