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In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that there are reasons for sad discovery of whale lying on the beach. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point.
First, the professor contends that the phenomenon (Explain it) materializes all over the world. Moreover, this wind patterns vary on the circumstance. (Need more explanation) This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that as a whales find food, they become closer to the Australia and enter shallow ocean. (What does this mean?)
Next, the professor insists that coming to ashore due to illness is unreliable. Because, they cannot explain why healthy whales are stranded. On top of that, going back to the water for whale is common affair. (Water? Which place exactly?) Moreover, whales can swim to the sea with their own strength. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that whale are coming to ashore because of sickness or they are already died prior to they arrived at beach.(Need more details)
Finally, the professor argues that whale have a navigation ability, so they can detect orientation and can find where the shallow ocean is. Moreover, that’s not been the case. (Meaning?) This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that the geological feature of a certain coastlines are the reason for whale’s stranding and the beam cannot reflect.
| 채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | Score | Limited 10-15 | - 의미가 불분명하거나 내용이 전달되지 않는 문장이 대부분이에요. - 논지에서는 whale stranding에 대한 이유들을 각각 포인트 별로 나타내주셔야 합니다. - Listening의 의견에 대한 설명이 많이 부족합니다.
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