1. professional theories -> professional knowledge가 나을 듯합니다.
2. one of important thing -> things
3. one of important things that cannot be neglected is that they have to... 이렇게 고쳐야 합니다.
4. be connected with 보다는 be associated with가 더 자연스럽습니다.
5. I partially disagree with the issue that college students should find subjects interesting them. -> I
partially disagree with the argument that college students should find subjects that interest them.으로
6. most of countries-> most countries
7. graduation high schools... graduating a high school으로...
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1. professional theories -> professional knowledge가 나을 듯합니다.
2. one of important thing -> things
3. one of important things that cannot be neglected is that they have to... 이렇게 고쳐야 합니다.
4. be connected with 보다는 be associated with가 더 자연스럽습니다.
5. I partially disagree with the issue that college students should find subjects interesting them. -> I
partially disagree with the argument that college students should find subjects that interest them.으로
6. most of countries-> most countries
7. graduation high schools... graduating a high school으로...
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