Describe a special day that you remember well
You should say:
Where you were
Who you were with.
What you did
And explain why you remember it well
I’ve had many glorious days, but I would
like to talk about a recent occasion that I went to an amusement park with my
roommates. My close friends and I are fun-loving folks and we always seize the
opportunity to chill out.
As you might know, there are many festive places
in them (라이팅이 아니니까 철자 오류는 그냥 넘어가겠습니다.) park that are great hangouts. These This include Lotte World, that is located
in the southern part of Seoul. It is highly accessible to public transport. In
this hangouts, there are lots of great excitements such as a ride, parade, and costume
shops.
Since we were all fun seekers, we did several
things that partyers always do each time they have a ball. For instance, my friends
and I went on a ride and we watched a parade in a festive mood. In short, the daylife
was amazing.
This particular day is still engraved in my
memory for several reasons. First and foremost, I thought it was an absolutely enjoyable
time out because everything was perfect, that there was no traffic cognition, nice
weather without fine dust and even we even saw the rainbow. Secondly, we got dressed
the similar clothes up in similarclotes and took some photographs to remember the moment. I would
never forget what we wore, which were that was white T-shirts and jeans
So, this is all I have to say about a
special day I can still vividly recall.
감사합니다:>
총평: 자잘한 오류가 있긴 한데, 그래도 이정도면 스크립트 자체는 진짜 잘 써주신 편입니다. Singi님의 경우 기본적으로 영어를 어느정도 하시는 것 같네요. 대신 이걸 있는 그대로 달달 외운다는 생각보다는 큰 틀에서 키워드를 잡고 자연스럽게 말하는 연습을 해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)