Describe a person who has interesting ideas or opinions
You should say:
- Who this person is
- What this person does
- How you know him
- And explain why you think his/her ideas and opinions are interesting
There are many people who have (녹음본에서는 has 로 발음하셨습니다.) interesting ideas or opinions, but among them, i can think of/pick say my personal trainer off the top of my head. Well, his name is W.M KIM and i met him about 3 years ago at the gym. (What this person does 에 관한 설명이 풍부하다고 볼 수는 없습니다. trainer 라는 사실 자체만으로는 조금 부족한 감이 있죠.) At that time, i was really tired of my heavy workload, so i needed to change myself to go through the day. So, i asked some advice from my parents and friends, and then i decided to go to the gym to have gain/receive 등 some useful advice from experts. There are many reasons why i think his ideas and opinions are interesting, but one of the reasons is that his advice was quite beneficial for me. What i mean is that, he pointed out some reasons why i was always tired tried. First reason is that i haven't any The first reason was that I did not have any breakfast and meals in the morning. So, i started to eat some boiled eggs with bread, coffee and vitamins. and then he said, i needed to exercise to gain some energy. So he taught me how to lift some dumbbells in the with right pose. After following his advice, i was able to could improve my health condition, and so that's why i think his ideas and opinions are interesting.
총평: 일단 발음부터 말씀드리자면, 물론 원어민에 비해서는 당연히 부자연스러운 면이 있지만, 원어민들이 이 내용을 들었을 때 최소한 발음에 문제가 있어서 의미 파악이 되지 않는 일은 없을 겁니다. 그만큼 한국인 (외국인) 치고는 충분히 깔끔하게 하고자 하는 말을 전달해주셨어요.
내용상으로는 위에 표시해드린 두 번째 조건과 더불어, 현재 말씀해주신 이유가 interesting 에 해당되는지는 조금 의문입니다. effective 에는 당연히 해당되겠지만, 흥미로운과 관련해서는 조금 논쟁의 여지가 있을 수 있겠어요. 이 외의 조건들은 잘 설명해주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)
P.S 물론 스피킹 점수에는 전혀 영향이 없지만, 어차피 아이엘츠 시험을 유학 가시려고 치르실텐데, i 를 대문자로 쓰는 습관은 꼭 들여주세요. 크게 어려운 일도 아니고 유학 가기 전 사소한 습관을 고친다라고 생각하시면 될 것 같습니다.