Describe a historical building you have been to
1) Where it is 2) What it looks like 3) What it is used for now 4) What you learned there
- How you felt about this historical building
Since my brother have has recently got married, I wanted to have a chance to go on a family trip to celebrate and welcome our new family member joining.
My family decided to visit Keongju where it used to be the (수도는 하나이죠.) a capital city of Silla Kingdom. Especially Bulkuksa, the famous historic temple, is a place where so many tourists from all around the world visit when they come to Korea, speaking of which, especially high school students go visit Bulkuksa for a field trip. I did go there too when I was a teenager.
The city and the historical site is located in the southern part of Korea.
I could learn ancient knowledge about the temple, when and how it was built and why it has a significant meaning in Korean history, which are things I had no interest of when I was little.
Municipality of Keongju preserved the site really well and the site was added to UNESCO world heritage list together with another famous touristic site, (여기는 쉼표를 하나 넣어드렸는데, 실제 말씀하실 때 이 쉼표를 반영해서 말씀해주셔야 합니다.) Seokguram. It encompasses 7 national treasures, the stone pagodas. Anyone can see the distinctive architecture style of the golden age of Buddhist art.
The unique serene atmosphere even feels exotic when there's not many chances to enjoy those tranquility these days, even though Korea once was called Land of Morning Calm.
총평: 표현상의 문제는 적었지만, 내용상 수정은 필요해보입니다. 일단 2번 조건 관련해서는 내용을 찾아볼 수가 없었고, 3번 조건도 is a place where so many tourists from all around the world visit 이 부분이 해당되는 것 같기는 하지만 명확히 드러나지는 않고 있어요.
문제를 본 이후 가볍게 메모를 하는 시간이 주어질 때, 이때 1번부터 4번 조건에 대한 답변을 작성해놓고 순차적으로 말씀해주시면 됩니다. 그렇게 했을 때 자연스러운 하나의 글처럼 나오도록 애초에 출제 측에서 1~4번을 맞춰놓은 것이기도 하고요. 수고하셨습니다 :)