Part 3
What movie genre do people in your country enjoy most?
I think Koreans love action or animation, but usually people in our age loves action movie. One of the most famous movie series is the Avengers, or we usually call them MCU, and MCU has a really big base of fans fanclub in Korea. I think one of the reasons is that they have a spectacular actions, which makes me really chilled when we see the good punishing the evil a good people punishes bad people. And also, because we can't do make those actions in reality but we get really stressed, so we can feel the excitement of punishing other people instead of us. (여기는 쉼표 전후의 연결 관련해서 조금 자연스럽게 수정이 필요합니다. 혹시 어떻게 바꿔야할지 모르시겠다면 댓글 한번 주세요.) I think that's why people really love action movies in Korea.
Do people prefer watching movies at home or at a cinema?
People in Korea prefer watching movies at a cinema. It is because the screen of a cinema screen is really big and people feel more emotion when they see in a bigger screen. Even in Korea there are more big screen Particularly, there is an even bigger screen in Korea which is called IMAX, and when people want to watch blockbuster films they usually watch those movies in an IMAX cinema. One of the best examples is the 'Avengers: End Game' which was released this year., (쉼표를 지우고 온점을 넣어드렸는데, 여기의 경우 말씀하실 때 반영해주셔야해요.) in the first day of release all tickets were sold out for 'Avengers: End Game'. It is because they wanted to feel spectacular emotions while they are watching movies, so I think that's also why the movies which was released a long time ago is being released again and again when time passes pasts. Therefore, at least people (처음에는 한국이라고 하셨는데, 여기와 일치하지 않으므로 둘 중 하나를 수정해서 통일해주세요.) around me really loves watching movie in cinema.
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