이런식으로 대답하려고 연습해도 괜찮을까요?
Who likes to travel more? Older people or younger people?
I suppose that it depends on characteristics of an
individual. But to regard an average tendency, many young people are eager to
go traveling. I think It’s because students or those who just started to earn
money had little opportunities to go on a trip so far. Moreover they access a
number of medias and get some information about good places to travel or some hot
places that a celebrity visited much more aster than older people. On the other
hand, old people usually have not enough energy or physical conditions to walk
around. For example, my grandmother’s back has been in a bad condition that she
got surgery. So she is not the one who really enjoy traveling because it is not
easy to for her to walk for a long time.
Are there fewer people using private cars because of improved public transport?
Yes I think less and less people are using private
cars since the public transport is well developed. I think that public transport
system in Korea is especially convenient in Korea. And I suppose that the use
of public transportation is increasing because theses days people are interested
in protecting the environment so they intentionally take a bus or a subway. I think
this is another reason other than the improved public transportation.
What do you think needs to be improved in public transport?
I have never thought about that before. (냉정히 보자면 이런 문장들은 도움이 되지 않습니다.) I think it is
significant to improve service to increase grow the number of users. Actually I feel
uncomfortable when some bus drivers drive violently and swear say swear words to
other drivers or passengers. It is common in Korea so some education or estimating
programs are needed to the drivers. (개선책을 하나 더 넣어주시는 게 좋습니다.)
What are the advantages and disadvantages of private transport.
Well with a private car, I can save my time because I can
move whenever I want and usually driving a car is faster than taking a public transportation
except during for the traffic jam. There is no need to walk to the station or bus
stop. I think it is especially convenient when I have to carry heavy things.
But there are some disadvantages as well. Firstly, I have to drive even when I
feel tired. This can lead to a very dangerous situation. Also when we go to a/the center of downtown with a car, we may feel embarrassing (이게 어떻게 민망함으로 이어지는지 설명이 잘 안 되는 것 같아서 '화남' 등 다른 감정으로 바꾸는 게 어떨까 생각됩니다.) since it is hard to
find some place to park.
총평: 2, 3번의 경우 조~~금만 더 늘려주시면 좋을 겁니다. 그리고 현재 표현상 어색한 부분을 수정해드리긴 했지만, 스피킹은 무조건 전달력이 최우선이므로, 문법 오류에 너무 두려워하지 마시고 내가 말하고자하는 바를 자신있고 자연스럽게 전달하는데에 조금 더 신경써주세요! 주변 지인분들을 앞에 앉혀놓고 연습하는 것도 도움이 될 겁니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)