처음하는거라 엉망인게 많을것같지만 그래도 첨삭 요청해봅니다!
Part 1.
- Why do you choose this major?
> I choose chose to major in design major because I was interested in making creative things creative anything.
When I chose choose this major, I worried about getting a job in the future. But fortunately, these days many companies want a to creative person. So, recently I'm not stressful about my future job.
- Are you student or you work?
> I am a freelance illustrator. (오...멋지십니다ㅎㅎ) More specifically, if someone needs some pictures, they give me an inquiry request me. And then, I will start drawing and send this finished picture. Last, they check my artwork and pay for me. I have been working for three years. (여기는 첫 문장과 같이 말씀해주시면 돼요.)
- What's the best thing about your job?
> Frankly speaking I don't like working in an office places. It is very boring to work in the same place all day That is very boring working in the same place. So, the best thing about my job is that I can work anywhere I go.when I work anywhere I can go there.
총평: 어색한 표현들이 조금 보여서, 정확도를 높이는데에 신경써주셔야할 것 같습니다. 스피킹의 경우 라이팅만큼의 정확도를 요구하지는 않지만, 그래도 최소한의 선에서의 의미 전달은 되어야 해요. 수고하셨습니다 :)
감사합니다!