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Describe a time that you gave an advice to others
Who you gave advice to
What the advice was
Why you gave advice
and how you felt about the advice
I’m going to talk about an (녹음본에서는 a 로 말씀하셨는데, an 이 정확하게 들릴 수 있게 해주세요!) advice that I
gave to a girl. I remember, at the end of the third grade I had (여기도 have 로 발음되었는데 had 가 맞습니다.) quite a lot of free
time. So, I voluntary voluntarily participated in a consulting program in my high school as
an adviser. This program was that made to help second graders in order to find their
dreams and future works that fit their aptitudes and interests. Through this
program, I met a student who was worried about her future. She was a soccer player
but, she couldn’t exercise anymore because she was hurt during the soccer game. Hence,
she suffered from stress and even she was afraid trying to anything. At first, I
just listened to her stories and tried to increase her confidence again. I
remember, for about a few weeks, I told said my stories or ones of my friends and
acquaintance. And I also looked up many famous sayings. Among them, the most
memorable one was is ‘No one can imagine how far you will go.’ Actually, at that
time, I wanted to challenge what I was afraid of, but I didn’t have the courage.
When I found these words, I felt my heart beat faster and I got a chance to reflect
on my self. Fortunately, she finally found what she wanted to do. So just to
sum up, thanks to this volunteer activity, both I and she she and I (이 어순은 외워두세요! 나중에 캐나다 가셔도 쓰셔야 하고, 평생 이용해야 할 어순입니다.) also gained confidence
and courage.\
총평: 이번 거는 문법상 자잘한 오류들이 조금 보이긴 했는데, 그래도 스피킹인만큼 6.0 선에서는 괜찮을 겁니다. 대신 라이팅에 이렇게 자잘한 오류가 있으면 조금 곤란할 수는 있고요!
수고하셨습니다 :)