Describe a risk you have taken which ahd a positive result
You should say:
What it was
Why you took it
What the result was
And how you felt about it
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I have taken several risks in my life which resulted positively, but I'd like to talk about the risk I took recently. Recently (이거 반복이 거슬리시면, 그냥 A few days ago 등으로 거짓말하시면 됩니다.), I chose (choose로 발음하셨습니다.) to take one semester off from school and I had to write the reason why i'm taking off. In general, students choose to lie because school won't like about their students is taking off to move to another school. Moreover, it is risky because if I fail, the professor will not look at me in a good way and have a bias. So, I worried about that and most of my friends told me that just tell lie that you are taking off to earn money for next year semester fee. However, I decided to be honest because I also needed to talk to my professor about it. Of course, professor gave me a call to ask me the specific reason and my situation. Fortunately, after I told her about my circumstances, she told me lots of good words and said "If there is are any good news, tell me and I hope you get a good score in IELTs". I was surprised about her favorable attitude because her act was different from what I expected. I felt sad that I have never met her and took her lectures due to Covid19 and the pandemic situation nowadays. I think I chose the a right way eventhough it can be resulted badly.
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총평: 3번은 평소와 마찬가지로 잘 해주셨는데, 이번 거는 제가 1/2번을 바꿔들은 게 아닌 이상, 신기하게 1번을 2번보다 훨씬 잘해주셨습니다. 2번은 버벅거림도 많고 문법 문제도 많았는데, 1번은 그게 현저히 적었네요. 어떻게 보면 좋은 거고, 어떻게 보면 나쁜 상황이지만, 여튼 실전과 제일 가까운 거는 2번일 겁니다. (아예 1번처럼 쌩으로 하지도 않지만, 그렇다도 3번처럼 스크립트를 바탕으로 하지도 못하니까요.)
생각해보니 지금 새내기이신데 코로나 때문에 새내기 생활도 잘 누리지 못하고 공부만 하시는 것 같아서 마음이 아프기도 하네요. 그래도 이렇게 열심히 하시는만큼 꼭 결실을 맺으리라 봅니다. 저도 물심양면 열심히 도와드릴게요~
수고하셨습니다 :)