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It is a common belief that people have a small
range of choices nowadays. However, I firmly believe that people have a lot of selections
because of the developed IT technology and increased transportation system.
To begin with, the development of IT
technology has offered people a lot of information to choose from. Since the
Internet has linked the whole society with a wide information network, people
can find out whatever they hope to choose from a broadened coverage. Furthermore,
the smartphone service encouraged people to look for the choices whenever they
are. For example, I decided to buy a pair of shoes by my smartphone last week
when I took a cup of coffee outside because I suddenly come up with mind that I
don’t have any thick shoes to prepare this winter. (여기부터는 '많은' 선택지에 대해 전혀 뒷받침해주고 있지 못합니다. 그저 스마트폰에 따른 편리함을 주장하고 있을 뿐이죠.)
Furthermore, the enlarged transport technology
has made it possible to expand choices widely by removing the different types
such as restriction of distance or time in a variety of industries. Nowadays, not
only people can enjoy travel no matter how far away the destination is, it is due to the developed aeronautical
industry, but they can also receive whatever they bought within a few days by the
enhanced shipping industry. (<-여기까지의 경우도 윗 문단과 비슷한 맥락에서 수정이 필요하고요. 총평에서 더 말씀드리겠습니다.) For instance, a lot of new airline companies with
nice airplanes were founded in Korea compared with 20 years ago, which gave
people diverse picks of places to travel abroad.
To sum up, as IT technology and
transportation system are developed, people naturally receive a lot of choices
in terms of different areas. For these reasons, it is clear that people have a
lot of choices in their daily lives. |