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With the development of technology, people have been enjoying many kinds
of convenient things. Especially, some people have got benefits from modern
communication technology, however, others are living without any benefit.
Personally, I agree with this perspective.
It cannot be denied that more and more people have been living a convenient
life due to modern communication technology. Many people could can keep track of
their friends or family members who are living apart in very easy ways. They
are able to make a call, walking on the street or able to or send messages via a
single click, even while walking on the street. These means of communication have made people’s life more efficiently.
Moreover, the masses could make a relationship with strangers more easily
through online. They can find someone with who has had similar interests and become
friends. Through this kind of hobby, individuals can overcome their anxiety or
loneliness.
While people have been living an abundant life with new communication
technology, still some people have not had any benefits. The main reason for
this problem is that most of them tend to live in isolated areas. It is true
that to enjoy those kinds of new technologies, the installation of the Internet or telephone lines is required it is required to install the
Internet or telephone line, but most companies are reluctant to launch their
business in deprived areas because of the inadequate profit. Secondly, some
people are very poor to buy those gadgets which can make them use the new
technology. Lastly, a few people are having difficulty to get used to it. (둘 중 하나만 골라서 이에 대해 상세한 설명을 하는 쪽으로 수정해주세요~ lastly 쪽에는 그래도 바로 뒤에 보완 설명이 있으므로 이걸 살리는 게 낫겠네요.) Specifically, many seniors are struggling with new technology to be accustomed to
it, but it is not easy.
In conclusion, I totally agree that many people have been enjoying the
positive factors of modern communication technology, whereas still some people
are still finding it hard to approach technology. |