■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : People in the past are more interested in improving their neighborhood (the area where they live) than now. 2014/0405 미국
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that people of these
days are more interested in improving relationship with their neighborhood than
people in the past. However, in my opinion, people are more insterested in
improving their neighborhood in the past than now. This is because, machine does
community working instead of working together and jobs of these days are moving
frequently than before.
To begin with, in the past people worked together
and it made people insterested in their neighborhood. However, nowadays machine
does working instead of people of community. This trends make decrease important
of being together and neighborhood. According to the poll conducted by Japan
government in 2010, 30 percent of people answered that they did not want to know
neighbor’s name or their jobs. The same poll conducted by Japan government in
1990, only 10 percent of people answered that they did not want to know about
their neighbor. It shows that the people in nowadays are not instersted in their
neigborhood than before.
In addition, people of old days were not
moving easily. They lived in same village for a long time, it made people know
each other deeply. However, these days people move easily and sometimes move across
the nation. This moving makes people do not instrested in improving their neighborhood.
For example, when I was 9, my family moved to every 3 years because of my
father’s job. It made me and my sister exhausted to know about neighbor and be
a friend with them. Me and sister were playing with each other without no other
friends of neighbor. Until now, we can not remember our neighbors at that time.
Because we did now build a relationship with neighbor at that time. However, we made friends in neighbor since we were not moving anymore. If we were not moved easily, we were insterested in improving neighborhood.
To sum up, these days people are not
instrested in their neighborhood because of machine improvement and trendy of
job movement. In this regard, I personally believe that old days people are
more instredted in building a relationship with their neighbor.
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