■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Cars have made a greater impact on society than airplanes. |
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▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who think that cars have made a greater impact on society than airplanes. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. First, it would have been impossible to travel around the world without the invention of airplanes. Second, airplanes have influenced our economy in a big scale. To begin with, before the invention of airplanes, it took a very long time to go abroad. Moreover, not only did traveling required time, but it was also hazardous. According to a study, it is estimated that over 3,000 people died annually due to long-term trip to foreign countries through ships 500 years ago. Now that the airplanes allow us to go abroad at anytime with much more safety, globaliztion could accelerate. Throgh planes, we can plan a trip to the other side of the Earth, and consquently meet diverse people, expanding our perspectives of view. On top of that, we can enjoy diverse products all over the world through plane-sipping. Making it a lot easier and faster to trade products, world's economy could get connected country by country. Our society's economy is influencing one another, making it possible for us to enjoy high-quality goods. I know this from my personal experience. When my father told me that when hewas on his buisness trip, he found out that he could get brilliant ideas which was limited to get just in Korea. On the other hand, China and south-east Asia take up a big portion of worldwide labor thesedays, thanks to the convinience that airplanes made for employees to move overseas. This made companys produce goods in a more efficient way. In conclusion, airplanes have made world-wide communication and shipping possible. In this regard, I think airplanes are the ones that give bigger impact on our lives, compared to cars. |
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