▶ Your Answer :People generally hold the idea that success is achieved only by efforts. It seems reliable, however, in my opinion, success is not disrelated with luck or other uncontrollable factors. First of all, each individual birth in different circumstance. People learn different language -through where they birth- receive different education by conception of their society. These indigenous individual factor affect individual success deeply and individual can't get other individual's indigenous factor technically. This prove that effort is not sole factor of success. For example, Bill gates, who is the founder of Microsoft, has made great accomplishments in his life. I read online that he was very successful because he was able to receive great education through his parents. He was able to create his special and intellectual idea by his parents' education. Also he was able to realize his idea by his parent's huge money. This story dispute the idea that effort is sole factor of success. Second, effort also effected by individual innate gift. It is general conception that effort can beat talent. But, according to modern studies, done by Toronto University, indicate that individual's patience determined by biologically. They argue that individual's patience planed when they were embryo and we don't know how to improve it. Patience is main factor of effort but patience already determined by biologically. This study completely conflict with topic's idea. Lastly, topic's idea can't explain someone who really lucky. For instance, lottery winner become the millionaire by luck. They don't effort but others effort to success. It prove that effort is not sole factor of success. In conclusion, I firmly believe that efforts is not sole factor of success. It is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above. |