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In the present, there are a number of things that people can enjoy rather than the past. Some people think that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. I agree with this idea for the following subsequent reasons. First and foremost, many people waste their time by using a smartphone. A smartphone has been used as an indispensable item for modern people once invented. The device provides them with a lot of advantage but there are many side effects. To be specific, they are taken away a great deal of time from their smartphone, which causes them to postpone their work they should do. For example, most of them spend their time on the contents such as Instagram, Facebook, YouTube and so on. Especially, in the case of Korea, many students put their time on using a smartphone. Once they hold on their smartphone, they forget about problems they should do like study for the exam. Therefore, I think that modern people enjoy too much time on the smartphone. On top of that, 'YOLO' lifestyle proliferates in contemporary society. 'YOLO' means "you only live once". I think that it is great said for modern people wearing out by working and studying. Obviously, spending time on the personal enjoyment-doing need for people. However, just enjoying 'YOLO' life without doing things they should do is not desirable. They should finish their work they should do, and then, they can relish their free time. For example, my friends suddenly went on a trip after resigning his workplace. He did not have any plan. When he came back, he still did not have any plan. After all, boarding on the company again was far difficult for him.In my view, this episode was just his avoiding. To sum up, many people squander much time on a smartphone in modern society. Moreover, the number of people who enjoy YOLO life without duty is increasing. In this regard, I think that they spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things rather than doing things they must do.
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