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문제:
When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
살면서 어려운 문제에 직면했을 때, 이를 해결하는 가장 좋은 방법은 무엇인가?
주어지는 선택지
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
경험자에게 조언을 구한다
finding information about the problem using the Internet
인터넷을 통해 문제를 해결할 정보를 찾는다
taking a long time to think about the problem
문제를 해결하기 위해 고민할 충분한 시간을 갖는다
모범답안
We all face difficult problems in life, and everyone has their own approach to handling them. When I am dealing with a serious dilemma, my preferred solution is to talk to an older and more experienced person about it. There are two reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
→ 연상, 또는 경험자에게 조언을 구하는 'asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem' 선택,
First of all, most of the problems people have are not particularly special and there are many individuals who have already dealt with identical issues. Therefore, when we have a crisis, there is always an older person in our life who has gone through the exact same thing. Not only that, but they have lived with the consequences of the actions they took to deal with it. My personal history is a compelling example of this. When I was a university freshman ten years ago, I once found myself falling terribly behind on one of my assignments. I could not decide between asking my professor for an extension, which may have made me look lazy in her eyes, or submitting poorly done work, which could have made me look like a terrible student. Fortunately, a sophomore in my department explained that most professors are happy to provide extra time when students ask for it in a polite manner. Moreover, he told me that none of my professors would view me as lazy for making such a request, as they all understood the pressures faced by students.
→ 발생하는 대부분의 문제는 누군가 이미 겪었던 것, 대학 시절 선배에게 도움 받은 일화 제시
Secondly, simply vocalizing our problems can help to put them in perspective. Merely having someone to listen to our problems can help us to solve them, even if that person does not have a lot of advice to give us. For instance, after talking to my father about a problem I was having with my girlfriend last week I realized that it was not the end of the world. Just by talking about the fight we had out loud, I realized that I was overthinking it and that my girlfriend would eventually calm down. Additionally, when I explained to my father that we were fighting about a purchase I made that cost just $50, I realized that we would both get over it pretty quickly. This came to me even before he voiced his opinion on the matter.
→ 어떤 문제들은 타인에게 말하는 것만으로도 해결되기도 함, 아버지에게 여자친구와 싸운 것에 대해 이야기하고 풀린 일화 제시
In conclusion, my approach to problem solving is to talk to someone about my problems. I do this because there are many people in my life who have endured the same things, and because vocalizing my issues helps me overcome my worries.
→ 요약하는 결론
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