Describe your neighborhood.
You should say :
where your neighborhood is
what kind of things you can do there
what you don't like about it
and explain what things you like about it.
• near the Dong Incheon station
• near the Dong Incheon station, which is 30 minutes walk from my home, there are a few place to spend time such as a park, cafes and restaurants
• near my home, it doesn't have a decent cafe/ I love dirinking something
• Differently from other neighbourhood where have a bunch of branch store, there are nice private cafes and restaurants
My neighbourhood is Sinheung-dong which is located near the Don Incheon station.
Actually, there aren't many things that be worth to do near my place. However, near the Dong Incheon station, which takes is 30 minutes walk from my home, there are a few places to visit to do such as a park, cafes and restaurants. So, I often spend my time there while studying in a cafe or walking at a park.
As I mentioned earlier, near my home, it doesn't have a decent cafe and that's one thing I am not satisfied with my neighbourhood (이거 반드시 넣으셔야 합니다.). Personally, I really love drinking something like coffee, tea but I have to walk for at least 20 minutes to get that.
Despite the fact that it takes 30 minutes to get the Dong Incheon station, I am happy with my neighbourhood. Differently from other neighbourhood where there are a have a bunch of branch stores, there are nice private cafes and restaurants. This means I can feel characteristics of my neighbourhood that you can't find in others.
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