there are several old people i like, but my favorite is my mother
She is the niest. (누구 중에 가장 착하신 건지 알려주세요!) on the top of that, she has the responsibility for the family and such a great positive energy.
We live together so i can see her every single day
So we somtimes have arguments, and whenever we do so whenever we have argument i think like we need to be away frim each other to
Appreciate the importance of each other
I like her for several reasons, first of all,
She loves me unconditionally, No matter what i do ,
She understands me and cares about me. Beside, she has a good sense of humor that’s because (이하 내용이 sense of humor 와 관련된 것 같지는 않습니다.) i like to talk
To her and she is really strong and responsible she has worked for 30years to support me and my brother
But now that she is getting old so i just want to reciprocate somehow
총평: 내용이 너무 뒤죽박죽한 점이 가장 큰 문제입니다. 착하시다는 등의 이유로 어머님을 좋아하신다고 먼저 초반에 말씀하시고, 이후 중간에서 다시 I like her for several reasons 라고 해주시면 짜임새있게 들릴 수가 없습니다. 개요를 짤 때 조금 더 신경써서 해주시면 좋을 것 같아요. 수고하셨습니다 :)