Overall, the youngest age group(between 16 and 24 years old) recorded the higest percent over the four years period. However, aults used less Internet as they got old, as a result, the lowest percentage is shown in over than 65 years old people group, from 2003 to 2006.
First of all, the percentage of using the Internet in 16-24 age group experienced same percentages in 2003 and 2004 which is 80%, then 2005, the rate increased significantly by 100 per-cent, which is the higest point over the four years and also among the five different age groups. On the other hand, there are simmilar rate changes between the age group of 25-44, and 45-54 age group. The percentage of using the Internet by both two age group rose graually: while using the rate of the Internet by 25-44 years old adults climbed from around 50% in 2003 to 80% in 2006, the rate of use of the Internet by 45-54 years old adults showed an increase from 60% in 2003 to 80% in 2006.
The age groups 55-64 and 65+ adults experienced a slight rise over the time period. Adults who are between 55 and 64 years old, used the Internet approximately 30% in 2003, according to following years, the percentage of using the Internet in 55-64 age group experienced a small fluctuation with upward trends. In addition, the using the Internet rate by over 65 old people could not over the 20%.
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